Madeline Magnificent

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100 WC week 34

May26

I was with a friend at my house and we were about to go to a park that I hadn’t been to before, apparently there is a maze, I love mazes they are sooo FUN!  it’s like doing a puzzle, I like doing puzzles too! when we got there my friend and I went straight to the maze and we lost each other we couldn’t see each other anymore. I was completely lost, but where could I go? I would just get even more lost. I heard footsteps very faint though so I yelled out ”Lilly is that you”? ”yes  it is” then she came out from the other corner, ”the exit is here” Lilly said, and walked out to do something else.

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“100 WC week 34”

  1. May 28th, 2014 at 7:20 am      Reply Mrs Skinner (Team100WC) Bristol, UK Says:

    Please make sure you link just the 100WC post please and not your blog.


  2. June 2nd, 2014 at 7:36 am      Reply Miss CL Team 100WC Says:

    I like that you have chosen a maze as the scene of your story. They can be scary places, so it’s good that you finished your story with a happy ending. Just be careful to check you punctuation – particularly capital letters.


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