Madeline Magnificent

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100WC #23

February24

Recently, I was researching about space and planets while I was on a rocket ship. While I was happily gliding through the atmosphere to try and get back home I was dodging all the planets  in my way.  I felt a bump and heard a rumble. The rocket ship was out of control.  I accidentally pressed  the button to go up, I couldn’t stop it.  It felt like I was pushing through earth.  I then found myself on a white floor where there was nothing around me.  I was in a different world and  now I can never go back home.

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“100WC #23”

  1. February 25th, 2014 at 6:06 am      Reply afrah3 Says:

    Dear Maddy,
    A nice 100 wc with both cohesion and clarity.
    It is obvious that you thought about the topic.
    Just watch out for the punctuation.
    Otherwise, a very well thought out piece of flowing writing.
    Yours sincerely,
    Afrah:D


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